Okay so here we go. The start of our J&D related comic Fée échecs. The story centers around C’s main character Torniquei and her boyfriend Noah who belongs to our friend that isn’t on here yet. But don’t worry, we’ll bug him until he does! And for those who know one of both of us know that we are very annoying This is our brain child, no one else’s. So please for your own safety don’t steal anything from this comic.

Anyway. The main characters will be posted as we go on. As you can see in the first dev White Pieces Part I ([link]). Now, white pieces you ask. Yeah not saying anything about that. But there are two sets of pieces. One is white the other is black.

Also please, please, please, please, for our own sanity (what we have left at least) don’t comment saying crap like. “this never happened in the game.” “Krew shouldn’t be alive.” “They don’t dress like that.” Blah, blah, blah. You get the picture, don’t do that. Because this is an AU and we can change the storyline however we want. So don’t go saying crap like that, cause you just waste our time and your own. Because we don’t look at or respond to idiocy.

And for you fangirls out there. Don’t bother reading, cause Jak and the gang barely make an appearance in this comic. Its basically strictly a story about Torniquei, so don’t ask where they are an such. They will be in here though. They just won’t have such big parts, like Jak and the crew do have parts on the board… they are just kinda insignificant.

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Yeah, so Z basically covered it all there. Though I must point out that I shall try and get at least some screen time for all of the canon characters, particularly Krew. I love teh Krew.

Anyways, yes, this is focusing mainly on OCs. But don't judge it on that fact. We still have a solid story line, and pretty much all of our OCs are solid characters with a distinct personality.

Onto the cover, may I just point out how LONG this thing took me. I mean, drawing the characters took long enough, but then there was all the inking and coloring and BLOODY HELL. It just really took a long time. But I'm quite happy with how it came out, so no worries!

The two characters here are Torniquei, the White Pawn and our "heroine", quotes because she's actually a rather evil and psychotic little bitch. But we love her anyways! The lovely lady in black is our main villain, Karada, the Black Queen, and that's all I'm gonna say right now. Mmm, I am so happy with how they're costume designs came out.

I'm going to be sumbitting a few different color variants of this into our scrap section later on. Mostly because I don't really like how Karada's outfit came out color-wise. Anyways, enjoy!

Ooo, and I'm offering a free pencil sketch to whoever can translate the title, Fée échecs, first. Have fun, dahhhlings!

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Canon characters © NDI
Torniquei and Sato © ~Torniquei
Kanna © *Ericanii
Noah © Lord Grape Juice
Other OC characters © ~CZMuze